February 4, 2010 § 1 Comment
I’ve never been particularly enthusiastic about posting work from uni, mostly because I don’t think it represents the kind of work I really want to produce. This isn’t because i’m not injecting enthusiasm and interest in the work only because i’m never able to produce the piece of work that I want.
This is what i’m currently reworking on for my assessment in a few days. Hopefully it will turn out the way I plan. I made so many mistakes the first time round. I’m completely redoing the whole thing.
Started from the very beginning. Took the original final piece (right) took a pen and drew lines across the whole thing.. see what was working what wasn’t.
On the left is the body of text printed in actual size with actual column width separated into sections.
The original piece I handed in. A complete mess.
What i’m working on now. The format has changed somewhat and the text is much more structured. This time i’m sorting out the layout before working on the hierarchies. Oh I have sooo many things to learn and so much left to do! Right back to it!
3rd layout idea. Arranging by section but adjusting composition to make it easier on the eye.
4th layout. the most logical, very clear structure of hierachy even if it doesn’t show. Only downer is that it won’t look as pretty and i’ll have issues squeezing everything in.
Off to bed… back in a few hours..